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The BossHoss

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Tar Heel

On January 14, 2018

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The BossHoss

Germany

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Bast... I rarely suggest corrections in the English bios, but this one reads rather clumsy. Currently:


Formed in Berlin in 2004, the band refers to its music as "country trash punk rock". Being the popular they are in Germany, they even successfully launched their own beer brand.



May I suggest either:


Formed in Berlin in 2004, the band refers to its music as "country trash punk rock". Being very popular in Germany, they even successfully launched their own beer brand.


or


Formed in Berlin in 2004, the band refers to its music as "country trash punk rock". Given how popular they are in Germany, they even successfully launched their own beer brand.



As I've said before, the editors' English is far better than my German, etc. will ever be, but some text does need tweaking from time to time....

History

Change by camembert electrique
2018-01-15 13:39:11 UTC
Assignee: Bastien camembert electrique
 
Comment by camembert electrique
2018-01-15 13:40:36 UTC

As the line in question was actually added by me once upon the time - and you succeeded in the other case -, I took the freedom to amend it, straightaway.

 
Change by camembert electrique
2018-01-15 13:40:38 UTC
Status: open processed